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The Little Smoke

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pencil on paper
a doodle from when i was working
Image size
3492x2766px 16.29 MB
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

This piece is extremely hard to critique because there seems to be not one flaw, not even two.
I love this piece because the way you have intertwined everything together and somehow overcrowded the picture without overcrowding it. For some reason it kinda reminds me of Alice In Wonderland, overcrowded but not overcrowded.
I have a suggestion, maybe practice your human faces? I found a couple of them and they're very good but need just a tincy wincey but of work.
I don't know about anyone else but the way you have shaded it plays tricks on my eyes. Don't get me wrong the whole piece is F.A.B.U.L.O.U.S but I just wanted to point that out.
Keep up the good work! I want to see MORE pieces like this! <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/p/r/p…" alt=":iconprincesslunaplz:" title="princesslunaplz" />