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The Little Smoke by Deborah-Valentine The Little Smoke by Deborah-Valentine
pencil on paper
a doodle from when i was working
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This piece is extremely hard to critique because there seems to be not one flaw, not even two.
I love this piece because the way you have intertwined everything together and somehow overcrowded the picture without overcrowding it. For some reason it kinda reminds me of Alice In Wonderland, overcrowded but not overcrowded.
I have a suggestion, maybe practice your human faces? I found a couple of them and they're very good but need just a tincy wincey but of work.
I don't know about anyone else but the way you have shaded it plays tricks on my eyes. Don't get me wrong the whole piece is F.A.B.U.L.O.U.S but I just wanted to point that out.
Keep up the good work! I want to see MORE pieces like this! :iconprincesslunaplz:
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:icondeborah-valentine:
Deborah-Valentine Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2017  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you so much! 
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Daniel-Loya-III Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2016  Student General Artist
your vision is beautiful and very well executed i really admire the bottom where the ribs begin it really rips at me when i look at that area with everything else together...

it feels great to gaze at this creation..
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:icondeborah-valentine:
Deborah-Valentine Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
I am grateful for your criticism , it makes me happy and also I learn more.
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Deborah-Valentine Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you for your kind Critique
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:iconacirmo:
acIrmo Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amazing work.
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:icondeborah-valentine:
Deborah-Valentine Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
thank you
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acIrmo Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome :)
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pmdart1408 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011   General Artist
wow so awesome. Love the layers of detail and textures.
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:icondeborah-valentine:
Deborah-Valentine Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank You PM for your kind comment
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:iconpmdart1408:
pmdart1408 Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2011   General Artist
youre welcome
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:iconnickmeister:
Nickmeister Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011
very cool.
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:icondeborah-valentine:
Deborah-Valentine Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank You :tighthug:
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:icongoatheadcorp:
goatheadcorp Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2010
featured on my journal : [link] ;)
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:iconyohowan:
yohowan Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2009
You got a crazy technique!
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:iconquaddles-roost:
Quaddles-Roost Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconrainbowwaveplz1::iconrainbowwaveplz2::iconrainbowwaveplz3: I`ve featured this in my latest journal [link] if you would like it removed just let me know :)
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ThunderYeti Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009
great flow and sense of space, i like the overlapping pieces and their twisty movements
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AgniConnor Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Fascinating! :sun:
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:iconlarkin-art:
larkin-art Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
eye gouging composition and mind blowing detail. another masterpiece from you!
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:icondeborah-valentine:
Deborah-Valentine Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you Larky
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:icondeborah-valentine:
Deborah-Valentine Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank you senor larkeen
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:iconangeleslaveau:
AngelesLaVeau Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
This image has been featured in my journal here ----> [link]
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:icondeborah-valentine:
Deborah-Valentine Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
Thank You SO very much for the feature! I appreciate it!
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:iconkarret:
Karret Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2009
Soo cool.. I've been missing your arts. :'] <3
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:iconann-mclaren:
Ann-McLaren Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome.. I love these..
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:iconsalhunter:
SalHunter Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2009
Wonderful doodle!
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42millones Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
that is a doodle???

wow!! superb draw!!!
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:iconashes2infinity:
ashes2infinity Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2009
there are few times ever i will say to somebody, "thanks for being alive, being an artist, and reaching this moment in your body of work"
this is one of those times.
so, thank you, for all that!
(and sharing w/ us)
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:icondeborah-valentine:
Deborah-Valentine Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
YVW
:heart:
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Autoclash13 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2009
Very Well done.
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:iconsh4down:
Sh4down Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2009
shamanic!

awesomee doodlee
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:icondeborah-valentine:
Deborah-Valentine Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
Thanks Luiz

when are you going to post more art?
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Sh4down Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2009
dunno i think i lost my art crtiativty
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:icondeborah-valentine:
Deborah-Valentine Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
u havent..u r just distracted
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:iconsh4down:
Sh4down Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2009
maybe i dont know when i will be not distracted again
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:icondeborah-valentine:
Deborah-Valentine Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
well if you dont know, no one will
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GTT-ART Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Great stuff, very nice
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:iconravart:
ravart Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amazing work!
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tiamat9 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2009
Superbly detailed and stylized. I love the forms and texture. Intricate and elegant visuals.
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:iconkdh:
KDH Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2009
Can you teach? .. can this be taught?

better yet, can it be put in pill form?


love it, as always
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bluesman219 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2009
I'm always amazed by these drawings Deb. Well done!! :thumbsup:
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:iconmr-frenzy:
Mr-Frenzy Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
stunning doodle :D
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:icondeborah-valentine:
Deborah-Valentine Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks frenzied one
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:iconcloxboy:
Cloxboy Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2009
That's pretty hot.
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:icondeborah-valentine:
Deborah-Valentine Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
where there's smoke, there's fire, right?
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Cloxboy Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2009
True. Now that makes sense but ducks, fuck ducks.
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Decarabia69 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2009
Amazing art! I should be so lucky to have such intricate (and beautiful) doodles! :)
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:icondeborah-valentine:
Deborah-Valentine Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
well doodle more and they get better
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Decarabia69 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2009
I wish I had more time to doodle. Work is usually too busy, and domestic things at home are the same way - if I have enough time to paint, I try to do that. Doodles are a GREAT way to loosen your mind and keep your skills sharp. :)
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sadist-oldman Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2009
Doodle....i prick me with 10000 needles and i may come back to reality this sent me flying high
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:icondeborah-valentine:
Deborah-Valentine Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
funny man
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